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THIEVES IN THE TEMPLE
Story by
Iona Yeager
Based on the CBS/VIACOM Series
DIAGNOSIS MURDER


Disclaimer: Diagnosis Murder, it's characters and locations are the exclusive property of CBS and VIACOM.  This story is intended for fan fiction only.  The author is not affiliated in any way with CBS, VIACOM, or the Diagnosis Murder staff, actors or crew.

This Story is Rated PG-13 for intense situations.

The Challenge: 95) A relative of Lynn Conklin's (Love Is Murder) who is also a psycho goes after Steve. - Bbw517536

Steve and Amanda's secret wedding and honeymoon ends in tragedy when Amanda disappears.

 

-1-

She moved the wooden rocker close to the window so she could see the silver blue car when it pulled into the drive.  Cradling the hand made blanket as if it were her child, she rocked back and forth.  Keeping time with the rocking of the chair she hummed a silly old lullaby while massaging the scars on her wrist.  The scars were old now, months maybe years old.  She didn't recall when, but one day she stopped struggling against her binds and her arms began to heal.  Still, the scars remained like a thin shiny bracelet of skin, reminding her that she must remain careful, even of her most private thoughts.  Her sense of time faded long ago like her anger and grief.  Only the fear remained, like the aftertaste of a bitter pill:  the fear and the love for her child.  Things were different once she had the child.  She lived for a long while in the dark place, the room without windows and the eternal wire covered light bulb.  She could barely recall her early days in the room and that one moment she had stood free outside in the midst of snow cover trees seemed a dream.  The Keepers, their white harlequin masks askew, dragged her back to the dark place and promised her that if she ran again, if she fought them again her child would die in her womb.  If she would not struggle, they promised no more secret cocktails with medicines that might harm her baby.  She became obedient and quiet, as she had learned to when she was a small child living with too many children in the foster home.   The Keepers served plain cuisine in fine China on a silver tray.  The same meal three times a day: milk, an acidic pulp filled orange juice, and warm water, in fine crystal.  The bright, hand-crafted plate with it's pattern of lilacs held exactly a half cup of  frozen peas and carrots with a cup of boiled  and shredded chicken piled next to neatly quartered whole grain bread. A tiny paper cup on the edge of the tray contained a large dark reddish pill, she recognized as a vitamin for the baby. They taught her new words and new memories about The Voice and The Face. The Face raped women, they told her, The Voice always lied.  The Voice wanted her mad so he could forsake her.  The pleasure she felt, the comfort the face gave her was an illusion.  The real image was in her dreams that came in the sudden flashes on the wall, always the same: The man with Face and the Voice tearing into women like a beast.  

To you, they said.  He did this to you.  Not believing she would cry and fight, until they convinced her struggles would kill the child in her womb.  She knew this to be true, so she learned to say the words, and soon she believed them.

She delivered the baby while completely alone, squatting in a corner like a cave dweller. She would not scream, afraid her Keepers would hear and come to take the infant from her.  She recalled an old movie where an Eskimo woman delivered her own baby and licked the birth blood away.  She felt like that woman, alone, but proud, strong and rejoicing in the birth of her healthy, chubby child.  She kissed the top of the squalling infant's head, begging her be silent.  There was no place to hide the child.   Peeling off the green cotton dress, her only garment, she wiped the birth blood from the infant, then wrapped the peach toned child in her sheets.  When her Keepers came they found her sitting on the toilet bowl, holding the child and watching as her afterbirth plopped into the water.  She starred at the painted white faces with terror widened eyes.

"Please don't take her," she begged them.

"Of course we won't take your baby," the Male said, but he reached for the child anyway.  "But you must let help you,"  To the Female he said:

"She's bleeding. She's not dying is she?"

"It's normal, but she needs rest and somewhere warmer, more cheerful than this."

"We can't afford to free her yet," the man argued.  "I don't know if this has been enough to change her."

"For goodness sakes, look at her. What is she going to do?" the woman snapped. "Look at her face.  You wanted her mind altered, so she's useless to Sloan.  I think she's far more gone than you bargained for,"  The Female turned to her, the red lips beneath the mask smiled, a real smile, gentle and kind, that broke the carefully painted lines on her mouth.

"Look at me," The female said.   "Do you remember when you were a doctor?"

In spite of her dusky coloring, her charge paled, shrinking from the Female's gentle fingers.  The woman nodded, slowly.  This was a new game.  New words. Except for the new smile, the painted face gave nothing away.

"Look at your body, look at the blood.  You need help, don't you?  For you and the baby?"

The woman nodded, a single tear sliding from her cheek to the baby's tiny clenched fist.

"We'll need to take you someplace better.  Someplace warm and nice.  And you'll be good.   You want try and run away?"

"I'll be good."

They  covered her in a blanket then blindfolded her while they drove her to a place in the open.  The air was warm and fresh.  They left her and the baby there, promising someone would come along and help them.  Obedient to the last she sat by the road, holding tightly to her child, not removing the blind fold until the baby began to cry.  She tore the bandage from her face and peered at the child in her arms.  Unheeding that she was on an open though lonely road in a forest, she found a place on the grass and opening her shirt began to nurse the baby.  The Lady found her there.  The Lady asked her questions about her name, where she came from, but she only shook her head, saying she needed help.  The Lady took her to a house where the air was filled with sunlight and the floors were made of wood and covered with soft rugs.  She brought another lady, a Doctor to look at her.  They asked her questions: Was someone trying to hurt her?  Was someone chasing her?  Was she running from her husband?  She only answered "yes" to the final question.  The woman told her she would be safe with them.  

"It's what I do.  I run a shelter for abused women."

They allowed her to sit on the porch and walk on neatly trimmed sun warmed grass.  They brought her soft, clean clothing and she and the baby slept on a large bed with flowered comforters and pink sheets. She drank sweet red juices, teas with lemon and honey, toast in the morning with orange marmalade and hot cereal. In the evenings she could eat noodles or wild rice with butter and herbs and vegetables that were crisps and fresh from the lady's garden. When the baby was three months old, they helped her dress the child in a yellow dress, with lacy tights and tiny shoes.  The baby had to see a doctor, get shots, they told her.  

"Things will be better when I return," the Lady told her.     "You'll be able to go home."

Home?  She remembered a house near water and a tall, handsome man with snow white hair, and the brightest, bluest eyes.  The baby, whose hair was dark, and whose skin had taken on gold tint, had blue eyes like his the first month, then they changed to green with dark gold sparkles.  She knew this man would adore the baby and take care of her, even if he had to shield her from the Face.  

She rocked the chair harder as the sun faded into a deep red sky.  As the sky turned black she began to cry noiselessly, thinking they had lied to her.  They had taken her baby and they would not be back.  She would have to break her promise and go look for them.  Then she saw the lights from the car coming up the drive.   She jumped from the chair and ran to meet them.  Even in the dark she could see it was not their car.  She froze as the door opened and the interior car light outlined the faces of the driver and his three passengers.  The woman, tall, dark skinned, and willowy was vaguely familiar, like a figure from childhood or old movie.  She got out first, moving the seat back to allow the others clim out. One man was tall, his hair white like halo in the half light.  The other man was about the height of the woman, with a strong shoulders  Finally the driver opened his door and stood gazing at her, his eyes like a cougar's in the night.  

It was him, his face cold and hard, like the image on the wall.

"My God," the woman said.   "Steve, it's her.  It is Amanda."

The man shook his head, his cold eyes unyielding, almost angry as he walked toward her.  

"Who are you?" he asked walking up the stairs.   She backed away, not bothering to hide her fear.  The Younger Man gripped the Angry Man's shoulder.

"Steve, easy," The Younger man said.   "She's in shock."

The white haired man said nothing.  He didn't move from his spot beside the car.

STEVE.  She knew that name.  It was His name.  The name with the FACE.  She looked at the tall man walking towards.  It was HIM.

Fear turned rage and she leaped at him, her nails scraping his face.

"You left me!"  She screeched, unheeding of his hands on her wrist.  She kicked and punched, until he was forced to bend her arms across her chest to hold her.

"Amanda, don't.  Darling, don't fight me," he whispered in hair.  She could feel his heart thudding like a drum in his hard chest.  His hands on her arms, though firm were gentle.  His face, close to hers was wet.  Something inside her chest cracked.  She wanted more than anything to kiss the wet face, to wipe away his bitter tears, but she knew she could not give in to these feelings.  She butted his chest with her head trying to break free.

"You left me, you bastard.  You left me to die," she said, hating the words and hurt on his face.  She must not believe in his pain, or that on the Younger man's face, and especially that on the older man's face.  They didn't care. They couldn't care.  She had to find her daughter.    "Where is Katherine?  What did you do with her?  What did you do with my baby?"

-2-

It didn't start as revenge. Devon O'Meara had only wanted to hear about the last few days of his sister's life--even the bad.  He needed to understand what had turned his loving, fun loving sister into a serial killer.  He hesitated approaching Steve Sloan, since Lynne died at the detective's hands, but Steve Sloan's report of the incident seemed almost forgiving of Lynne's madness.  So when Devon followed Sloan and his beautiful companion to Community General's Doctor's lounge the last thing he expected to over hear the police officer say about Lynne was:

"There's nothing to tell you, Amanda, honest.  Just my quarterly romance with the local psycho."

Of course, Sloan told this to his lady friend in private, seemingly unaware that Devon might overhear their discussion.  Probably thinking Devon was  a staff doctor taking a break, the two sat close together at a table near the coffee machine, their bodies close.  The woman reached over and touched Sloan's hand.

"Steve, you're too hard on yourself.  You couldn't have possibly known this woman had a problem."

"She dated me.  Even chased me," Sloan told the woman with an unpleasant laugh.  "That should have been a warning  enough that she was ready for a padded cell or had an irate husband waiting at the door."

 Shaking with fury, Devon unsuccessfully attempted to steady his grip on the Styrofoam cup.  Coffee rattled in his cup and spilled over his hand, staining the cuff of his white shirt and the napkins around the coffee maker.  He jumped as slender, golden brown fingers lifted his hand.

"Are you all right?"  Devon looked up into Sloan's companion brandy colored eyes.  She smiled reassuringly at him.   "I'm a Doctor, don't worry."

"Imagine that," he managed.   "Finding a doctor in a hospital."

She laughed, a thoroughly pleasant sound enhanced by a heavenly, but subtle perfume.  Devon forced a smile to his face.  He felt strangely moved by the woman's gentle touch, as if he could feel their combined destiny. Steve Sloan approached them, his stance protective as the woman examined Devon's hand.

"This doesn't look too bad," the woman decided, her voice cool and professional.   "But lets run a little cool water over it, and I'll have a nurse apply some burn ointment."  She beckoned to a passing orderly with her left hand.  Her wedding ring sparkled.  Devon went white, looking blankly at Sloan.  

"You're married?" he asked dumbly. Steve's eyes narrowed, immediately alerted.  He opened his mouth with a sharp question, but his companion's amused giggle cut across his words.

"
I'm married," she explained.  "But not to this lovely gentleman.  We're just friends."

The woman didn't see the quick subtle change on Sloan's face, she was busy tending Devon's hand, but Devon saw it: a tightening around Sloans lips, the blue green eyes, darkening.  This kind and lovely woman might consider Sloan 'just a friend" but Sloan was in love with her.  Devon smiled.  

Steve, observing Devon as closely as the oddly familiar man regarded him, spoke up his voice abrupt and cold enough to catch the woman's interest.

"Have we met?  Are you on staff here?"

"No, I'm not a doctor," Devon offered, nodding a thank you to the woman.
"I'm an attorney and victim's advocate."  

"Oh dear,"  The woman stepped away hands raised in mock horror.  "I'm not facing a malpractice suit, am I ?"

Devon laughed then, the first genuine mirth he had felt in the weeks after his sister's death.

"No, I'm not that kind of lawyer, Doctor--?"

"Amanda Livingston," the woman shook his uninjured hand.

"Devon O'Meara," Devon squeezed her hands.  "Well, it was nice meeting you Doctor Livingston.  I have to be going.  I have a plane to catch."

"Hey," Amanda tapped Sloan's cheek, diverting his troubled frown as Devon left the room.  Sloan wrapped his large hands around her fingers and kissed them, a causal, yet loving gesture.  "Do you want to talk?" She asked him.

"Not about Lynne.  I should have been able to help her Amanda
," He patted the woman's hand as the door closed.  "Come on lets talk about your trip.  How did CJ like Hawaii?"

San Francisco:

"Get me a line to all the open files at the Los Angeles police office involving a Detective Steve Sloan," Devon ordered as he barged into his San Francisco office.  His secretary looked up startled from the pile of papers on her desk.

"Mr. O'Meara, I wasn't expecting you to come in today," the handsome woman stammered.  "Your father called.  He wanted to know if -- if the person they have in Los Angeles is really your sister Lynne?"

"It was Lynne," Devon snapped.  "Get me those files.  And see what you can tell me about a Doctor Amanda Livingston."

Los Angeles Police Department

"What's wrong Sloan?" Tanis Archer asked her partner.  She sat on the edge of his desk.  "You look ready to tear a piece out of somebody's throat."

Steve glanced up at Archer with irritation, then shrugged.  Archer showed real compassion when Steve returned to work after his incident with Lynne. Other fellow officers, male and female, especially his captain were not as sympathetic, unmercifully teasing Steve about his track record with female felons.  However, it was not Lynne's death that haunted him at the moment, it was the way Devon O'Meara looked at Amanda.  Steve knew he had no right to feel jealous of another man flirting with Amanda, still like a nagging itch at the base his scalp, Devon's too handsome face and smiling blue eyes bothered him.  The crime data base had no information on a Devon O'Meara.  California records showed him to be an attorney of good if not impeccable standing.  Archer put a file down on the table, her face open but neutral.

"Thought you might want to see this.  Someone claimed Lynne's Conklin's effects and body."

Steve hesitated then opened the manilla folder.  He shuffled the papers, paling as he read the signature.

"You all right?"  Archer asked.

"I don't know.  I think I made an enemy today."


"Fancy meeting you again,"  Agent Ron Wagner indicated the seat across from him.  His smile was cold, appraising.  Devon O'Meara returned the smile and sat in the preferred seat.

"It is a strange coincidence.  I am the last person to see Amanda Bentley before she supposedly died, and then she shows up an amnesiac at my fiancee's mountain cottage.  How weird is that?"

"I don't believe in coincidence, Counselor," Ron told the man.  "Tell me again, just how your fiance found Amanda?  And why wait three months to tell anyone?"

"I'm going to repeat only what I said to the LAPD, and nothing more," Devon explained.  "You know what I do.  We run shelters for battered women.  We hide women all the time.  When we stumbled on Amanda on the road near the woods, she was shoeless, in a cotton prison dress, cuddling a newborn wrapped in nothing more than a sheet.  She was bleeding for God sakes and she was terrified. We got a doctor to look at her.  We figured she was hiding from someone or had escaped from some Godforsaken prison farm.  She wouldn't say who she was, and Hell, I thought Amanda Bentley was dead."

"So for three months, you hid her at your fiancee's cabin?"  Ron scoffed. "Why didn't you try and find out who she was?"

"We tried.  We checked missing persons, police reports.  Hell, I was the one who flagged you guys with the fingerprint check.  Now, I'm not saying anything more without a lawyer."

Ron pushed the phone across the desk.

"Get a good one."

-3-


Amanda blinked, then opened her eyes, pressing at them with her fist.  She gazed up at the white ceiling then the soft blue walls.  Except for her bed, an overhead television, and the handsome, white haired man sleeping in the chair in the corner, the hospital room was empty.  She looked at her wrist.  The bindings were gone, so was the IV.   She sat up, frowning with distaste as she plucked at her hospital gown which was sticky with breast milk.

"Hey you! Doctor Sloan," she called out sharply.  The white haired man's eyes opened abruptly, instantly alert. He stood up and stretched and then smiled teasingly at her.

"You barked, Madam?"  he asked.  Scowling to hide her confusion and susceptibility to the man's charm, she held out her damp gown.

"Could I get the breast pump?  It must be time for you guys to milk me again."

"You do seem to have an abundance," he said with a small naughty grin.  At her glare, his face became at once solemn.  "We want to try something different today, Amanda."  

She regarded him with suspicion.  He seemed to suppress some kind of emotion.

"Well," she snapped with impatience.  "What?"

"Katherine doesn't like the bottle much," he said slowly.  "We thought we'd bring her up and the two of you can have breakfast together."

Amanda composed her face with difficulty.  It had been three weeks since these people had let her see and hold her baby except through a window with guards standing near by.

"What's the catch?"

Mark Sloan smiled.

"You don't hit the Nurse in the head with a pitcher or try to leave the hospital with your daughter."

"So you finally admit that she is MY daughter."

"Honey there was never any doubt of that," Mark said gently.  "Do we have a deal?"

Amanda nodded.  Looking at her fingernails thoughtfully she added:

"Can I see my other children.  My boys?"

"They're at school right now," Mark said slowly, studying her face.  "But if you're certain you're ready we can bring them for dinner tonight."

"I want to see them.  My Mom and Dad too, if they are not too angry with me."

"They're not angry, Amanda.  You were missing a long time.  They thought you were dead and they just had to be certain it was really you."

"And are they certain now?  Are you?"

"I knew who you were the moment I saw you, honey.  But yes, the DNA test using CJ's and Little Katherine's blood prove that you are definitely Amanda Sloan."

"Bentley."  Amanda corrected defiantly.  "He didn't want be my husband.  He didn't even tell you did he?"  Amanda challenged when Mark opened his mouth to dispute her claims.  "Does he have to come?"  Amanda suddenly looked like a sulking, but frightened little girl.

"Who?"  Mark asked innocently.

"You know.  Your son.  Is he coming?"

"Well, Steve is your husband, Amanda.  The children live with him now."

Mark didn't add it nearly took an act of God to persuade the Bentley's to let Steve keep the boys and to keep them from suing for custody of Katherine, once they found Amanda.  Mark insisted that Amanda's recovery would accelerate if things were the way she and Steve had planned them: All them living as a family at the beach house.

Amanda didn't answer.  Looking at her bowed head Mark sighed.

"Okay, honey.  I won't force you to do anything you don't want to.  Just the children today."

He walked towards the door.

"Mark?"

Mark's hand stilled on the door.  Not in the six weeks since her return had Amanda acknowledged him by his first name.  He swallowed and blinked to keep sudden, unexpected tears from his face.

"Yes?"

"This room is so plain,  I mean for the baby and the boys," Amanda said.  "Can we brightened it up a little.  I mean there must be something attractive in this hospital that I can't use as a weapon."  

Mark turned to look at her then.  His heart swelled as he saw the bright teasing, very Amanda like smile on her pretty face.

"I think I can find a stuffed bear or two," Mark managed before he fled to the hall. He nodded briefly at the FBI agent guarding the door, then signaled to the nurse.

"I brought my daughter-in-law some clothing from home.  You want to take them to her?  And get her flowers and a some stuffed toys from the gift shop.  She likes purple and green."

"Are you certain that's wise?"  Mark turned his eyebrow raised, more head physician than parent in that moment.  "Of course, Doctor Sloan" the nurse said hurriedly reaching for her phone.  "Are you all right Doctor?  You sound strange."

"I'm fine," Mark said, clearing his throat.  "A little cold I think."

By the time he reached his office, Marks face was streaked with tears.  Steve, blowing noisily on his delighted baby girls stomach, paused seeing his father enter. He turned white, clutching the baby close.

"Dad?  What is it?  Is it Amanda?"

Mark nodded then seeing his son's dismay, held up and hand and smiled.

"She's fine, son. She's fine.  She called me Mark, that's all,"  The older man sat down in his chair  "It's been so long since I've heard her say my name.  I think she's turned the corner, son. I'm going to let her nurse the baby.  We'll let her keep Katherine in her room today.  Maybe tonight, if things go well."

Steve's face lit up, and he kissed the baby head.

"We're going to see Mommy."

The baby gazed up at her Daddy's face, her large round green gold eyes fascinated by the sparkling stuff in his eyes.  She wave a hand at him, trying to catch the tear.

Mark sighed, knowing what his son would ask, what he asked every day.

"Steve, I'm sorry Son. She's not ready to see you yet."   Mark gripped his son's shoulder. "I know this hard, but she went through__"

"I know what she went through Dad.  You don't have to remind me of what happened to my wife because of..."  The baby, unsettled by her father's agitation, whimpered, nuzzled against him and tried eating his cheek.  Steve paused, contrite.  He kissed the child then held her out to his father.

"She's hungry.  You better take her to her Mother."

Mark took the baby, who immediately snatched her Grandpa's glasses.

Mark made a playful, censuring noise at the child and rescued his lenses from a thorough tongue bath.

"She's getting better, Steve.  You can take her home soon."



End of Part One.

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